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Invented by Gregory R Barden, it's comprised of at least six stanzas. Each stanza is consistent with itself in rhyme and decreases in the number of lines with each stanza, with the final stanza created from the line rhyme of each stanza, a rhyme scheme of AAAAA, BBBB, CCC, DD, E, ABCDE. 

     

I see wonder wherever I look, be it the sea or a babbling brook. Decoding Mother Nature's Handbook, Time scribes Her secrets in its scrapbook cataloging every niche and nook. I need but gaze at a starry sky or hear the honks of guess flying by to appreciate Earth; I oft sigh picturing sunsets in my mind's eye. All colors of the rainbow adorn Gaia's landscapes, time-tested and worn, enriching our world from rose to thorn. And when a sea of stars starts to pool, Luna's moon glimmers like a jewel. Our planet's a blue marble in space. Earth's sights are easy to overlook, I pause to see them, or at least try. And when I do, I oft feel reborn, realizing that only a fool would not be wonderstruck by this place.

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Date: 11/29/2021 9:06:00 AM
That's a beautiful poem, Robert! I agree- the world is full of wonder. Congratulations on your first-place win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/29/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/28/2021 8:46:00 PM
I return to say Congratulations on your well-deserved #1 position in Robert's contest. Congratulations!!!
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Date: 11/29/2021 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2021 5:37:00 AM
Brilliant writing, Emile, God's creations make us wonderstruck:)
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Date: 11/25/2021 6:36:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, It's a beautiful world if one but takes the time to see it in its splendor my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/24/2021 10:01:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful writing, Emile. I have looked at pictures of the earth from space and been amazed by the sheer beauty of our planet. Wondering what we will do with it? Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 11/24/2021 11:10:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, we live on a phantasmagorical planet, and yet often fail to appreciate its beauty, I hope you enjoyed your trip my friend, Emile.

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