Wonders Never Cease - Ct

I smiled when orange sun bursts peered,
They blush for purple iris leafs,
Us spring tide heart flames so revered, 
Like robin red breasts perched on eaves

Cosmic arcs harvest moonlight spread, 
Leafy woodland suburbs green shed,
Garden mazes gold mint spiked trail,
Scented frosts plough a snow drop veil

When orange sun bursts peered they blush, 
For purple iris leafs I smiled,
So revered like robin red breasts,
Perched on eaves us spring tide heart flames 

Fountains spray with ice tip sprinkles,
Seven wonders dash in twinkles.

Poem created : 9 September 2020

       Contest   : Charonnet Poetry Contest 
      
      Sponsor   :  Charles Messina 

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Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 4:54 AM
A belated congratulations to you. Creative work that expresses ideas in color. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Your words are so encouraging and truly generous. Thanks, Sara, for your visit H
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 10:33 PM
Oh I see this is an unusual sonnet form . Also I see you got a win with it. Belated congrats, my friend. Pretty imagery
Koplin Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:30 AM
what wonderful imagery Howard, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Howard, great poetry my friend. Unfortunately, the last stanza was off or this would have placed higher. Congratulations on your placement! All the best...Charlie
Kerr Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Hi Charles, Many thanks for your award which I’m always grateful for. I also appreciate the constructive feedback Take care Howard
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