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Wondering Why Life Can'T Be Simple

Wondering why life can't be simple, I look forward and see hurdles, I look back and see the start line, Inches before I started. Wondering why life can't be straight, I look forward and see alternatives, I look back and see wrong choices, Yet choosing which to take, Maybe this or maybe that. Wondering why life can't be happy, I look forward and see despair, I look back and seek my mistakes, Trying my best to move forward, The past rigs me to pieces. Why can't life be without problems, When the only thing I don't see are solutions?

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Stephan McBride

Date: 12/22/2022 11:32:00 AM

This is great, so glad to see you writing, this is how to figure things as this out, tell it to yourself it's going be simple I might make mistakes but so what learn and move on, keep looking forward, enjoy what you have in life , be you , don't let this wicked world change you , you are are full of strength and life, and ready to take on the world.

Komal Walimbe
Date: 12/23/2022 2:27:00 AM

Your words of encouragement are always welcome!!! This is a wonderful inspirational piece...thank you so much for your kind words and I am so glad to see people like you taking time for reading my poems...it always makes me happy! Have a great Christmas Stephan! :)