Wondering If You Remember Too

In the twilight, with red velvet clouds
I remember you
still imprinted on my mind's eye
when for a time, we were lovers
who blessed the morning sun
and blessed the evening skies
between
we wandered in whirling whimsical wishes
of wanton dreams
colored by hands, intertwined
around the brushes of love's heart
where we painted our faces
on the walls of our days and nights
It brings a smile
on this, the evening of my birth
as I watch the sunset, again
for the sixty-seventh time 
in quiet reflections of our yesterday
finding a tear from my memory of you
wondering...if you remember too

4/25/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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J.T. Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Nice words -JT
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Wow, Frederic. A beautiful romantic poem that starts strong with a fabulous first line... and delivers all the way. A definite FAVE for me.
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:35 PM
written with such tenderness and radiance, frederick...may you collect more dreams... huggs
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April 25, 2018 at 3:40 PM
I love that music, time to say goodbye is one of my most favourite songs and your poem flows so well with this song... Nice to see a new profile photo of you..
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