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Wondering If You Remember Too

In the twilight, with red velvet clouds I remember you still imprinted on my mind's eye when for a time, we were lovers who blessed the morning sun and blessed the evening skies between we wandered in whirling whimsical wishes of wanton dreams colored by hands, intertwined around the brushes of love's heart where we painted our faces on the walls of our days and nights It brings a smile on this, the evening of my birth as I watch the sunset, again for the sixty-seventh time in quiet reflections of our yesterday finding a tear from my memory of you wondering...if you remember too 4/25/18

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Date: 5/3/2018 3:41:00 PM
Nice words -JT
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Date: 4/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
Wow, Frederic. A beautiful romantic poem that starts strong with a fabulous first line... and delivers all the way. A definite FAVE for me.
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Date: 4/25/2018 4:35:00 PM
written with such tenderness and radiance, frederick...may you collect more dreams... huggs
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Date: 4/25/2018 3:40:00 PM
I love that music, time to say goodbye is one of my most favourite songs and your poem flows so well with this song... Nice to see a new profile photo of you..
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