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Wondering

Icing on cake not chocolate Nor white but mixture_gray Cool air flows over and around Stirring air; porch breezeway Crow lands in top of pecan tree Upon a fragile limb Another crow joins him_limb bends Precarious crow whim Second crow flies away saves face First crow flies away soon I wonder if they had pecan Tart for breakfast or noon

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 11:02:00 AM

I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Sara. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/8/2012 10:27:00 AM

it's funny how the mind works, isnt' it? I love the 2nd and 3rd verses. the imagery is fantastic :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2012 5:41:00 AM

bird-like nuances are like sweet melody playing in my mind, sara... much enjoyed with huggs!

Daniel De Culla

Date: 8/7/2012 3:06:00 PM

Nice¡ I do thank you yr Words, and Blessed Be¡

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/7/2012 2:47:00 PM

Sara; I enjoyed this one. What ever they had it for - it was a good treat. Thanks for sharing. Hope your husband is better. Lucilla

Len Gasun

Date: 8/7/2012 12:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one, Sarah. It's fantastic and seems made me starve while reading it . I love both cake and choco. LOL. Thanks again for your time to read and give comments to my poem. May God bless you and your family always.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/6/2012 7:35:00 PM

Your first verse made me think of my hair, not chocolate now, but gray. I love the rest of your poem.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/6/2012 4:34:00 PM

I would have my bets that they had their tart at breakfast, birds love to eat early! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write this afternoon Sara! I enjoy a good crow poem, something about them that fascinates me! Keep writing about about those amazing crows, I love it! Awesome piece my friend! Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2012 3:44:00 PM

love your imagery, here, Sara, harry