Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Wondering

Icing on cake not chocolate
Nor white but mixture_gray
Cool air flows over and around
Stirring air; porch breezeway

Crow lands in top of pecan tree
Upon a fragile limb
Another crow joins him_limb bends
Precarious crow whim

Second crow flies away saves face
First crow flies away soon
I wonder if they had pecan
Tart for breakfast or noon

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 11:02 AM I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Sara. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan August 8, 2012 at 10:27 AM it's funny how the mind works, isnt' it? I love the 2nd and 3rd verses. the imagery is fantastic :)

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2012 at 5:41 AM bird-like nuances are like sweet melody playing in my mind, sara... much enjoyed with huggs!

Daniel De Culla August 7, 2012 at 3:06 PM Nice¡ I do thank you yr Words, and Blessed Be¡

Lucilla Carrillo August 7, 2012 at 2:47 PM Sara; I enjoyed this one. What ever they had it for - it was a good treat. Thanks for sharing. Hope your husband is better. Lucilla

Len Gasun August 7, 2012 at 12:16 AM I enjoyed reading this one, Sarah. It's fantastic and seems made me starve while reading it . I love both cake and choco. LOL. Thanks again for your time to read and give comments to my poem. May God bless you and your family always.

Joann Grisetti August 6, 2012 at 7:35 PM Your first verse made me think of my hair, not chocolate now, but gray. I love the rest of your poem.

Russell Sivey August 6, 2012 at 4:34 PM I would have my bets that they had their tart at breakfast, birds love to eat early! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write this afternoon Sara! I enjoy a good crow poem, something about them that fascinates me! Keep writing about about those amazing crows, I love it! Awesome piece my friend! Great Work!!

Harry Horsman August 6, 2012 at 3:44 PM love your imagery, here, Sara, harry