Wondering

i set at home all alone
wondering what to do
where did i go wrong
i fell like my life is through
im stuck in a place
i dont want to be
my lifes a disgrace
my soul wants set free

what am i going to do?
im stuck against a wall
torn between these to
someone is bound to fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, debbie
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Debbie. Love, Carol
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September 15, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your time on soup will be fun..lots to do here on site... check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 10:32 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Debbie. Love, Carol
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September 15, 2010 at 3:01 AM
No feeling like the feeling of being trapped, with no choices. Excellent write.
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