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Wonderful Star

There once was a wonderful star Who thought she would go very far Until she fell down And looked like a clown She knew she would never go far She would land near the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 11/15/2012 5:46:00 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Cassie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2012 1:29:00 PM
Cassie, i love this,,, and if one day i land near the moon,,, i'd be okay with that... enjoyed this limerick... always~pd
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