Wonderful Star

There once was a wonderful star 
                                 Who thought she would go very far
                                            Until she fell down
                                         And looked like a clown
                                   She knew she would never go far
                                     She would land near the moon
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November 15, 2012 at 5:46 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Cassie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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November 13, 2012 at 1:29 PM
Cassie, i love this,,, and if one day i land near the moon,,, i'd be okay with that... enjoyed this limerick... always~pd
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