Wonderful Feelings

Beautiful eyes open across a pillow top,
It seems for this moment time will stop,
The earth slows and sounds wane,
A frozen moment without stain.

Your body close to mine,
Our hearts beat in time,
With a smile of simple pleasure,
This moment should last forever.

Some say perfection is unattainable
For most things that's explainable,
But in your arms and with your heart's affection 
I have found a brief moment of perfection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 30, 2008 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations Julie, on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2008 at 4:06 PM
Interesting slant on a love poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
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June 10, 2008 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations Julie on this soft loving poem "Wonderful Feelings" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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