Wonderful

Wandering through the memories, the old couple smiled
Observing fixedly the wedding album kept as a treasure
Naming the photographs that were taken for the leisure
Dwelling on the mind the years that were far in the time
Emerging a wish that will strength their lasting romance
Renewing their vows as a proof of a true love existence
Finalizing the commitment they pledged fifty years ago
Unveiling the devotion and admiration that did not go
Lasting forever until the last day of their existences







For Wonderful Acrostic Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Sixth Place
1-3-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Yet another wonderful win Nayda.. big congrats!
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Nayda, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Very nice sentiment, thanks for participating, congrats on your fine placement!
Negron Flores Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Thank you John. It was a honour to participate in the contest.
Scars Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Nayda, congrats on your placement! *smiles* -luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Thank you Laura
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Nayda, this is truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win!
Negron Flores Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Hansteven
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