Wonderful-2

Wonderful-2  Free verse acrostic

W onderful is my life being here with you
O nly you can make my heart rejoice
N ascent feelings of love, move me to
D esire you, be with you, to
E mpty myself into you, to
R emove all feelings of doubt and despair
F orevermore wanting you, to guide me to
U nexplored places and emotions
L ighting my pathway and illuminating my life.


John Derek Hamilton
January 13,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sage Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:55 AM
excellent acrostic John...lovely
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Thanks just trying free verse it's kind of different for me
Legend Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:20 AM
very nice....excellent.
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thanks not used to free verse yet!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Great n lovely John.. this new form is doing wonders.
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thanks Dr Upma
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