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Wondereous Lover

Will the sun ever shine thy rain ever rain! save me the pain give me the gain may i satisfy my lust find true love girl, you are the river where i fetch happiness may our love be ageless your care be endless.. so i do wish!!!

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Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 10:16:00 PM

MOONEYES, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

John Pen

Date: 6/18/2014 4:05:00 AM

I wish you endless love too......

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2014 11:54:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mooneyes :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:00:00 PM

Mooneyes, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2014 5:55:00 PM

Very nice hopeful poem, wish well and write on :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 5:29:00 PM

Mooneyes, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 3:18:00 PM

Mooneyes Bill, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.