Wonder of Sunshine

Warms to the very bones
Brightens life in early morn
Making dew glister
Rainbow prisms of color
This the wonder of sunshine
Written: 10/24/2012 Tanka Crazy-Sunshine Contest 2nd Place Winner
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Theraven Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Carol, Still reading and left in wonder by your words. God Bless.... -Richard
Maverick Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Just stopping by Carol, can feel the rays..' hope to see more writes from you at some point..'
Jackson Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Lovely sunshine. Life always seems better when we have sunny days. Your poem brings a ray of sunshine. Best wishes Linda
Carrillo Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 9:37 PM
You are right it is a true wonder. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Okubo Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations Carol. This is really magnificent...Thanks.
Kovrlija Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 8:48 AM
So warm and lovely!
Gopela Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Sunshine speaks of hope and rejuvination! Well-written! Your new friend on soup! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:03 PM
yes you are the wonder of us all.... waiting for you to color upon us...pd
Horsman Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 2:12 AM
this is one i missed, and a winner too.. excellent poetry...Happy New Year...
Macfarlane Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:31 AM
Your warmth shines in this lovely write Carol! Congrats on your win! Hugs
Goller Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Congratulation for your winning poem, A beautiful Tanka poem.Thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich
Mason Gibbs Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Very warming poem, that should brighten up your snow filled days, thanks so much for the comments on my poetry, stay warm and be blessed :)
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:36 PM
CAROL..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD
Onclaud Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 3:15 PM
ohh, this is a gem, carol.. congrats with huggs!..:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 3:05 PM
congratulations, CArol and a happy sunshiny day to you.
May Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 12:23 PM
A Sunshine on sunshine ....congrats on a great win Carol
Zerbst Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful poem. I like the part about the rainbows.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 11:33 AM
CONGRATS CAROL O AN EXCEPTIONAL WRITE AND WONDROUS WIN LUV .. SUNSHINE IS ONE PERFECT THING IN LIFE .. STAY SAFE FROM 'SANDY'.. WE R IN THE MIDST OF HER WRATH NOW ..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Big congratulations on you win xx
Guzzi Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:21 AM
Great new word! GLISTER old english cool Carol! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:42 AM
Thank you to each and everyone who has commented or congratulated this poem. You are all so greatly appreciated. I am glad it made you happy also Leonora. Thank you. Love, Carol XXXXXX
Gasun Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations my friend Carol for winning 2nd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora
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October 26, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Carol, sunshine makes everyone feel better' Great Tanka poem. Anne
Yamin Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 3:42 PM
This fine Tanka is surely a winner, Carol. Your writings have always impressed me. Thanks also for your kind comments on my Tanka The Candle. -Mohammad
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