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Wonder of Dusk

Hands interlocked;day goes dark, the night spreads its sheet, Ripples on stream as fries play, Joy flows like a fleet, Moon shines with a dim light, As fire flies lit up jasmine, Blushing with delight. Olusegun Arowolo Date:10-01-2012 Contest:"Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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Date: 10/9/2012 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful verse Olusegun!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/9/2012 7:06:00 AM
I would have placed this higher..its very nice! congrats. BG
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Date: 10/9/2012 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:53:00 AM
Wow! This is LOVEly! Nicely done Arowolo!
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:09:00 PM
Splendid images you have drawn with your words.
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Date: 10/1/2012 12:06:00 PM
Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Olusegun. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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