Wonder of Dusk

Hands interlocked;day goes dark,
the night spreads its sheet,
Ripples on stream as fries play,
Joy flows like a fleet,
Moon shines with a dim light,
As fire flies lit up jasmine,
Blushing with delight.


Olusegun Arowolo   Date:10-01-2012



Contest:"Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 9, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful verse Olusegun!Congrats on your win!
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October 9, 2012 at 7:06 AM
I would have placed this higher..its very nice! congrats. BG
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October 9, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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October 2, 2012 at 2:53 AM
Wow! This is LOVEly! Nicely done Arowolo!
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October 1, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Splendid images you have drawn with your words.
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Olusegun. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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