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Dedicated to those people that are always stressed and need a little bit of wonder-landish magic in their lives!

Wonder land, Forever to expand, Not only in a book, It's how we look, And see the world, Like if you twirled, You would see life, No longer as sharp as a knife, But mixed and fun, That's how it's done, So, look at life through a child's, Perspective and see the wild, Side of life and growth, Or just see both, Sides of who you are, And want to be, rid yourself of the scar, Of pressure and society, And rid yourself of anxiety, So, open your eyes, To get a wonderland suprise.

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Date: 10/2/2023 9:06:00 PM
Enjoyed the energy and flow! Great message and rhymes.
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Date: 10/2/2023 9:07:00 PM
Hi Karen, thanks for the comment! I always enjoy getting comments from you! - Phoenix :)
Date: 10/2/2023 5:03:00 PM
Beautiful Fire Bird. very heart warming. xxx
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Date: 10/2/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thanks!! - Phoenix :)

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