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Women's circle

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Taking the risk,
Baring the soul,
Seeking the wisdom
That shall make us whole.

Raising the arms,
Spreading the wings,
Hearing the music
That deep in us sings.

Stepping the dance,
Chanting the song,
Feeling the sisterhood
Tender and strong.

Sharing the love,
Speaking the name,
Calling the blessing
And lighting the flame.

Written 7/28/2016
Take the Dagger from my Heart, Please- Poetry Contest
sponsored by Broken Wing
N/A in Premiere Contest Number 5, Judged 8/27/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/17/2018 3:16:00 PM
Wow what a gorgeous tune a capella catapulting your poem to the level of a prayer or chant. Lovely, Agnes.
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Date: 12/5/2017 5:34:00 AM
Thankyou for a beautiful composition like this...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/5/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Charlene.
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
So pure
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/5/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Noorulain.
Date: 9/8/2017 1:30:00 PM
Hi there Agnes, I love this poem. I was wondering if you would allow me to share it on my blog for inspirations of words to share for Blessingways or Mother Blessing Ceremonies? My blog is located here: http://sacredpathbirth.com/blog/. Thank you! Avira
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/9/2017 3:24:00 PM
Avira, I would be honored. Please feel free to use the poem. I am sending you soup mail
Date: 8/6/2016 9:42:00 PM
Oh I just had to see this one . Its title really drew me in and it does exactly what I thought it would!! Great poem.
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I wrote this as a song for a retreat of our women's circle. Here is an audio: https://soundcloud.com/rain-woman2/taking-the-risk