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Women Dont You Just Love Them

She placed her arms around, And clasped her hands pressing her chest closer Not uttering a sound Her movements were poetry in motion She was dedicated with a passion Her gaze was a hypnotic potion As she stood with her legs slightly astride She put her all into it Her femininity she did not hide With my cup of tea, I admire her from afar As she wrestles the Ikea flat pack from out of the car

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/5/2019 5:14:00 PM
Brilliant and funny! Well written!
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:28:00 PM
LOL this is cute Hell....lovin it
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Date: 7/31/2011 10:06:00 PM
"Her movements were poetry in motion" I love that line.... I might use it sometime ;) I wish I could spend the whole night reading your poetry, I'll try to squeeze in some poems before my parents make me get off the computer. I really like this one though.
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:13:00 PM
tough tootsie.... cute one!
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:41:00 AM
Sidney , Wow a look at real life .last line made this poem. Anne
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:12:00 AM
I can see you looking! The last two lines threw me for a loop - unexpected. It is a great write.
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:43:00 PM
This is so neat becuase it describes how men notice women doing almost anything as sexual. Can you teach me how to feel that way watching my husband of 37 years doing ordinary chores? heehee. (hmmm maybe that is the problem. He rarely does chores. That is something that would turn me on!)
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:38:00 PM
Love the end with Ikea. Puts all the romance of everyday life in perspective. Autumn
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:39:00 PM
gr8 sid ! Powerful imagination and brilliant description . . Really nice . I had my imagination . . Lol .
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:18:00 PM
well lol.... your just wonderful.. and yes a cup of tea, and sit there and see... jolly jolly you are... and yes I'm guilty and you know when the comments are mine... by the way. when you have time i would like for you to stop by and read my latest poem. PLEASE~ no i'm not begging... that's the title... he he! i would love your quote... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:16:00 PM
Funny poem, Sid. You cracked me up! We can't always be dainty you know... Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:24:00 PM
Rofl. And through all of this you're calmly downing a cuppa. Liar, liar!!!! You must have been panting your eyeballs out. Thanks for this Sid special. I enjoy your humor. :)))
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:41:00 AM
that was great now if as she bent her pants split that would have been even more glorious lol great write.
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Date: 5/23/2011 12:48:00 AM
aaahhh hahaha. you meanie. made my monday morning though. thanks for the smile :)
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