Sidney Hall Mad Poet Poet Rhyme

Women Dont You Just Love Them

She placed her arms around,
And clasped her hands pressing her chest closer
Not uttering a sound

Her movements were poetry in motion
She was dedicated with a passion
Her gaze was a hypnotic potion

As she stood with her legs slightly astride
She put her all into it
Her femininity she did not hide

With my cup of tea, I admire her from afar
As she wrestles the Ikea flat pack from out of  the car

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Krish Radhakrishna November 5, 2019 at 5:14 PM Brilliant and funny! Well written!

Germaine Elliott November 14, 2011 at 1:28 PM LOL this is cute Hell....lovin it

Dana Smith July 31, 2011 at 10:06 PM "Her movements were poetry in motion" I love that line.... I might use it sometime ;) I wish I could spend the whole night reading your poetry, I'll try to squeeze in some poems before my parents make me get off the computer. I really like this one though.

Doris Culverhouse June 22, 2011 at 3:13 PM tough tootsie.... cute one!

Anne Rutherford June 20, 2011 at 3:41 AM Sidney , Wow a look at real life .last line made this poem. Anne

Elizabeth Wesley June 17, 2011 at 9:12 AM I can see you looking! The last two lines threw me for a loop - unexpected. It is a great write.

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2011 at 8:43 PM This is so neat becuase it describes how men notice women doing almost anything as sexual. Can you teach me how to feel that way watching my husband of 37 years doing ordinary chores? heehee. (hmmm maybe that is the problem. He rarely does chores. That is something that would turn me on!)

Autumn Ehrhardt June 8, 2011 at 5:38 PM Love the end with Ikea. Puts all the romance of everyday life in perspective. Autumn

Red Fiery May 30, 2011 at 7:39 PM gr8 sid ! Powerful imagination and brilliant description . . Really nice . I had my imagination . . Lol .

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2011 at 4:18 PM well lol.... your just wonderful.. and yes a cup of tea, and sit there and see... jolly jolly you are... and yes I'm guilty and you know when the comments are mine... by the way. when you have time i would like for you to stop by and read my latest poem. PLEASE~ no i'm not begging... that's the title... he he! i would love your quote... take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire May 24, 2011 at 4:16 PM Funny poem, Sid. You cracked me up! We can't always be dainty you know... Love, Carolyn

Delysia Hendricks May 23, 2011 at 3:24 PM Rofl. And through all of this you're calmly downing a cuppa. Liar, liar!!!! You must have been panting your eyeballs out. Thanks for this Sid special. I enjoy your humor. :)))

Lisa Cooper May 23, 2011 at 7:41 AM that was great now if as she bent her pants split that would have been even more glorious lol great write.

Jodie Williams May 23, 2011 at 12:48 AM aaahhh hahaha. you meanie. made my monday morning though. thanks for the smile :)