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Women Do Share

So Adam and Eve

Shared an apple from the tree

The snake he was pleased

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Carol Fillmore

January 17, 2011 at 5:31 PM

This is a very clever haiku, well done! Shar, thanks so much for your comment on "Avatar", much appreciated! Carol

Eiken Laan

January 13, 2011 at 2:25 AM

Sharon, This has put a big smile on my face, it is brilliant, how clever you are, I love this senryu, so evil yet perfect:))

Robert A. Dufresne

January 4, 2011 at 5:40 AM

Another reality take humorously put! Ingenious Sharon.

Debbie Guzzi

January 3, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Makes one wonder what would have happened IF women had kept all the knowledge? Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2011 at 12:17 AM

great title!!! And ending! Luv ,andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 1, 2011 at 5:51 PM

Nice imagery for the spicy write. Good luck in the contest, Sharon.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 1, 2011 at 4:20 PM

And so it goes on Shar.. clear and simple picture in your words .. how it all began .. the fall of man from woman from snake... nice reminder luv... months ago I co sponsored a contest called Adam and Eve with another poet and it was fun ...but not as much as reading this one..luv..