Women Do Share

So Adam and Eve Shared an apple from the tree The snake he was pleased

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/17/2011 5:31:00 PM

This is a very clever haiku, well done! Shar, thanks so much for your comment on "Avatar", much appreciated! Carol

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/13/2011 2:25:00 AM

Sharon, This has put a big smile on my face, it is brilliant, how clever you are, I love this senryu, so evil yet perfect:))

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/4/2011 5:40:00 AM

Another reality take humorously put! Ingenious Sharon.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 2:00:00 PM

Makes one wonder what would have happened IF women had kept all the knowledge? Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 12:17:00 AM

great title!!! And ending! Luv ,andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2011 5:51:00 PM

Nice imagery for the spicy write. Good luck in the contest, Sharon.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 4:20:00 PM

And so it goes on Shar.. clear and simple picture in your words .. how it all began .. the fall of man from woman from snake... nice reminder luv... months ago I co sponsored a contest called Adam and Eve with another poet and it was fun ...but not as much as reading this one..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/1/2011 2:15:00 PM

Ahhhh the shared apple that started it. Nice write my dear Sharon. With love Michael