Women Are Roses

Women are roses:  
God’s embodiment of beauty
Expressed 
In a plethora of dazzling colors
That
The soul of man captivate 

All roses,
Endowed with a mystic aroma are
Which 
Only the initiates to scent are able
For that reason, divinity,  
Wishing, His finest of creations to 
Protect, 
Armed guards all around them
Has placed:
The vigilant sharp thorns,
For
To keep the profane  
Away! 

 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
 25 SEPTEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:27 AM
You expressed my sentiments exactly in your very lovely write my friend. Women are made more delicate than men because they are to mothers as well as wives. I give this magnificent poem a solid 7 and let you know it was a joy to read..
Trifiatis Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:30 PM
I am not surprised my friend, Robert, that I express your sentiments. This is because I am as sensitive as you are and as respectful towards the ladies for they deserve it for the reasons you mentioned among other things! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a splendid way!
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:48 AM
All women are roses indeed my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Well, mon ami Maurice, I trust your experience and fully agree with you! Thank you for visiting my friend. Much appreciated!
Yaseen Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:51 AM
I feel comparing with rose is the perfect.... Gentle, delicate, beautiful, Adding aroma to garden of life, have their lovers like thorn to take care and what not. splendid work
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Absolutely right you are my friend, Malik! Thank you for your visit and heartfelt comment!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:13 AM
beauty always flowers pal beautifully penned piece demetrious
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Liam. Yes, beauty, always, does bloom!
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