Women

Women      ( Acrostic )

W... Women have a story, since the begining of time.
O...Over the centries, we have come a long way.
M... Mothers we become - for that is our role in life.
E... Every man should be grateful, that a woman gave him birth.
N... Never underestimate a woman - for you could be surprised... 

03/06/2014
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note; Just a small tribute to us women
on Woman's Day. Hope you Like it...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:26 AM
:) sweet sweet Lucy... This a thought of a woman that's been tried and tested but still remained fruitful, tough and graceful.. Thanks for this..:) nd am proud to be a woman..:)
Carrillo Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 6:03 AM
Thank you - me too.
Harrell Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Haha, I love this. Yes, men -never underestimate a woman! Have a great Sunday, Lucilla :)
Carrillo Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 6:02 AM
Thank you I am late with this one
Macfarlane Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Lovely tribute to us women Lucilla and I like it very much...Yay women! Hugs
Carrillo Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 11:15 PM
Thank you Cecilia, I am glad that you like it.
Vaso Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 10:12 PM
I am very grateful !!!!!!!!!!!! :) :)
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 2:54 AM
I know you are.
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 1:04 AM
this was a sweet tribute for women that you did. Sorry I missed it on Woman's Day!
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 2:54 AM
Thank you for this nice comment.
Devnath  Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 1:04 PM
A very nice truth of the world. Without woman no one can be born. Woman are always get the first preference than the man. In our country Goddess are prayed. True women are always be respected. If one does not respect the true women that's the absolute innocence of that being surely, I feel too. Loved your vision here. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 2:53 AM
Thanks Bi.
Pettit Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:04 AM
Helen Reddy did not state it as well in her hit song. Decent write.
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Thank you Robert, I will have to listen to it.
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 8:48 AM
- Yes!! - I like it very much, Lucilla :) - I'm only a few days late ... sorry - but better late than never ... Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Thanks Anne Lise, I'm glad that you like it.
Seal Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Hi Lucy, What you say is true, women have been surprising me all my life, usually with a rolling pin in hand haha, just kidding, Us men are lucky to have you ladies in the world. Take care, Richard
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:26 PM
I use the rolling pin for other things. Men are not all bad - it's just that we pick the wrong ones sometimes.
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:12 PM
proud to be a woman and your radiant piece says it all,lucy.. we rock!.. huggs
Carrillo Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Thank you so much. We do - don't we?
Sivey Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 11:54 PM
I always put women a higher than myself, as they are really the better sex in my opinion! You name it and I can show that the woman would be better at that situation! It's just an observation that I've seen. Oh there is an exception...most women can't do the strenuous physical labor as well as a man, but other than that the woman is better at anything! And they are certainly better caregivers! They are mothers with their motherly love, can't beat that! What a fabulous write, Great Work!!
Carrillo Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Russell; Thank you very much for such nice comment. I had second thoughts when I wrote this. I didn't want men to get the wrong idea. I don't think that women are better than men. I just think we should be the same.ou are a great person. God bless you always...
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 9:43 PM
hey, thanks for remembering your sisters on woman's day!! NIce one.
Carrillo Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Good morning Andrea; Thanks for liking this poem. Us women play a big part in this world of men...
Callus Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Hope you won't mind me butting in where women tread...but may I too pay tribute to all women. In the meantime, never underestimate a man! :) :)
Carrillo Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Thanks Paul and I don't mind. I have seen a lot of women suffer a lot in life and I'm sure it goes for men too. I myself would never underestimate anyone, but it happens more to women.
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 4:05 PM
fabulous tribute on this special day. loved this acrostic. Jan x
Hamilton Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 2:40 PM
succulent and clever write Lucilla well penned hugs
Walker  Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful Lucilla. I did like this a lot.. Read Strength Empowered! by yours truly and let me know what you think... :)s Verlena
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