Women.

foot deep stuck in the muddy waters of society....
head still high.

throat choked with the monotonous choruses of life...
voice still firm.

arms twisted,bend and broken.........
determination still unmatched.

betrayed again and again by destiny......
faith still unquestioned.

LEAD LADY.LEAD ON.

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Beata Agustin

August 19, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

December 24, 2015 at 12:27 PM

AWESOME POEM

Pooja Mitter

March 12, 2011 at 8:13 AM

Congratulations Vaibhav for making it through round one of contest.good luck to u. Pooja Mitter.

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 9, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Vaibhav. Love Carol

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 9:27 AM

Congratulations Vaibhav on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Patricia Opel Jaye

December 6, 2010 at 5:40 PM

I really enjoyed your poem this poem means courage, and strengh against all odds great write very inspiring.

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

December 6, 2010 at 10:20 AM

Beautiful; honest, so profound! Love it! Congrats on being featured!!! Lay

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Sara Kendrick

December 6, 2010 at 5:41 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading your work..Congratulations on being featured on HomePage this week..Sara

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:53 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Susan Palli

November 14, 2010 at 9:52 AM

Soon we'll see a change! (2Peter 3:13)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 2, 2010 at 8:57 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. interesting write on women.. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest scene ..good luck with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 1, 2010 at 9:33 AM

You have a flair for poetry on women, Vaibhav

Vaibhav Jha

October 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM

thank you for your comment. please read my other poem. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 1, 2010 at 9:20 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vaibhav. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

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