Pratik Bhala Poet ABC

Women

You are the great dame who gives to human ,a birth,
and seems like representative of god on Earth.

Womens you are the memoriable god gift,
knowing your duty well ,you properly lift.

Matrons you are the synonym of the word kind,
thought world without women is really like a blind.

Thankful to god for such great dame creation,
i think all women's are the nominee of appreciation.

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Beata Agustin July 25, 2024 at 3:32 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Mahtab Bangalee June 9, 2020 at 4:07 AM superb and excellent womanhood writings Pratik Bhala June 9, 2020 at 6:00 AM Thank you sir

Darlene De Beaulieu April 13, 2020 at 12:58 PM Hello Pratik Bhala, Welcome to Poetry Soup. This is your first poem and I think that you were nervous. So s time goes by you will get better. Always check your spelling before posting a poem. I say you did well anyway. Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.

Lochan Chugh April 9, 2020 at 10:44 AM I liked your vision. Your poetry put a mirror in front of my closed eyes. It is a great work but I think you need to work more. I found many spelling and grammatical mistakes. Hope you take my advice seriously. Pratik Bhala April 9, 2020 at 8:34 PM Yes sure I will