Womb Her Temple

Quiz Contest question    
define God in a word
"Mom" won first prize

If Mom equals God 
why nowhere temples for Mom?
"Womb" is her temple 

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By Hitendra Mehta
April 2011

For Soup Contest 
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Earlier : 7th Place in Members Contest - Senryu for Mom by Francine Robert

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/9/2011 5:46:00 PM
There was no womb at the Inn? ;) You and me gal friend on the same page! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:06:00 PM
Creative win..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on a great write my poet friend
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:37:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win, Hitendra : )
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations Hitendra on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:04:00 PM
Hitendra, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your success with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Hitendra
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Date: 5/4/2011 3:14:00 AM
Excellent write Hitendra!Congrats.Please visit my poem'Take me home,Mom'-kashinath
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:35:00 PM
Glad to see you here, Hitendra. Congratulations in the contest. WEll deserved!
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:00:00 PM
lovely concept for this occassion, hitendra... my cheery cheers for the greaat win:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:11:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on this fabulous win for this magnificent poem in Francines' contest on Mother ... enjoy my friend for an awesome write ..
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:55:00 PM
I so agree. Lovely. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/3/2011 5:43:00 PM
congrats on your seventh place win in the contest Hitendra, great set of senryus
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Date: 4/29/2011 4:20:00 PM
thank you for entering my contest , you have soup mail
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:33:00 PM
Hitendra, this tiny poem of yours is one of your very best, in my opinion. I have to fave it!!
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Date: 4/29/2011 1:07:00 PM
WONDERFUL PARALLEL HITENDRA MY FRIEND ON MOM AND GOD AND HOW DELICATE THE WOMB TO CARRY NEXT GENERATION... GOOD LUCK IN FRANCINE'S CONTEST..THIS ONE IS BOTH UNIQUE AND ORIGINAL... STANDS ON IT'S OWN LUV.. CREATIVE AND INTUITIVE...LUV..
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