Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Senryu

Womb Her Temple

Quiz Contest question    
define God in a word
"Mom" won first prize

If Mom equals God 
why nowhere temples for Mom?
"Womb" is her temple 

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By Hitendra Mehta
April 2011

For Soup Contest 
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Earlier : 7th Place in Members Contest - Senryu for Mom by Francine Robert

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Debbie Guzzi May 9, 2011 at 5:46 PM There was no womb at the Inn? ;) You and me gal friend on the same page! Congrad's Light & Love

Sara Kendrick May 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM Creative win..Congratulations..Sara

Michael J. Falotico May 4, 2011 at 1:58 PM Congrats on a great write my poet friend

Jack Horne May 4, 2011 at 1:37 PM Many congratulations on your win, Hitendra : )

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2011 at 12:48 PM Congratulations Hitendra on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

John Freeman May 4, 2011 at 12:04 PM Hitendra, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your success with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Hitendra

Kash Poet May 4, 2011 at 3:14 AM Excellent write Hitendra!Congrats.Please visit my poem'Take me home,Mom'-kashinath

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2011 at 11:35 PM Glad to see you here, Hitendra. Congratulations in the contest. WEll deserved!

Nette Onclaud May 3, 2011 at 11:00 PM lovely concept for this occassion, hitendra... my cheery cheers for the greaat win:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 3, 2011 at 9:11 PM Congrats Hitendra on this fabulous win for this magnificent poem in Francines' contest on Mother ... enjoy my friend for an awesome write ..

Tahera Mannan May 3, 2011 at 8:55 PM I so agree. Lovely. Many warm congrats for this win.

Francine Roberts May 3, 2011 at 5:43 PM congrats on your seventh place win in the contest Hitendra, great set of senryus

Francine Roberts April 29, 2011 at 4:20 PM thank you for entering my contest , you have soup mail

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2011 at 2:33 PM Hitendra, this tiny poem of yours is one of your very best, in my opinion. I have to fave it!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 29, 2011 at 1:07 PM WONDERFUL PARALLEL HITENDRA MY FRIEND ON MOM AND GOD AND HOW DELICATE THE WOMB TO CARRY NEXT GENERATION... GOOD LUCK IN FRANCINE'S CONTEST..THIS ONE IS BOTH UNIQUE AND ORIGINAL... STANDS ON IT'S OWN LUV.. CREATIVE AND INTUITIVE...LUV..