Woman of My Dreams

Her smile gave the attraction
i went without any calculation
and gave her an explanation
that her sight gave me the admiration

i told her she was my destination
my every imagination
i needed no demostration
to prove my affection

after along conversation
she gave me her expectation
and asked my intention
because she expected no separation

she gave me no limitation
because she had accepted my application
in her heart i was in the first position
and her every sensation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Shem, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Wamani Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 4:08 AM
wow thats amazing....we can share our poems to each other... i want to be your poet friend tooo skat
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:11 PM
She sounds wonderful Shem - welcome to poetry soup:-) hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Shem W.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Wamani Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 4:10 AM
thanks linda....thank you for being my poetry friend
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