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Woman In Gold

The eighth lioness of  the field arrives
permeating heat, inhaling  exhaling mist
of blistered days perched on strands of
morning glories and floats of shimmering
porous sun.... she will throb like a wild
gyspy air, like so  she will inhale
on thirsty lungs blowing bright rubble upon
brooks and shores where twinkles 
of light feed their need for humid
skin:   lush grasses glint with 
perspiration huffing and puffing
the unfinished sentences of a day
which plunges into an ocean of moist human
abandon. 

Daughter of Cancer- Leo,
she will adorn the midsummer mantle with
                a rhapsody of August’s  saucy haze.
               And in her nymph-like silhouette, lovers kiss in 
unrestraint confessions where forests open  
their  secret gardens  and tender beasts chew the fire
of an impassioned night...
this of which August rides without shame, without
brain.



Favourite Poem From December 2017 Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Inspiration from Klimt's Painting,' Woman In Gold'
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Written 12/23/2017,  Resubmitted 11/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gentile Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Wow Nette, such an impressive write!! No wonder it is a top ,top winner. Congrats - so well deserved xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Wow - what an amazing poem, nette. Bravo for your well deserved gold medal win... a perfect match!
Rose  Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 5:39 AM
I can see why this was your favorite poem. It is rich in tapestry and well worded Nette, I love it. and you. Have a blessed day, hugs xo
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:10 PM
A very enjoyable read. Congrats on your win, nette.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Great verse, Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Wonderfully chewing 'the fire of an impassioned night', Nette ... Congratulations on your as usual nice poem ...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:53 AM
A lovely write, Nette! Trés sensuous! Congrats!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your win.
Barden Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette ... blessings and happy holidays, my friend! :-)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Great impressionistic poetry, Nette! You wove a grand human tapestry of silky sensual fabric. Beautiful penning this write be. Gorgeous poetry. Love and happy holidays to everyone.
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 10:34 AM
An epic write Nette...
Sands Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Excellent! Very well done Nette. :) Good luck in the contest
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 6:18 AM
Amazing how original and magnificent his golden paintings are! You painted this woman in gold in your own imagination and brought her to life...lovely poem..best for a win, nette!
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