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The eighth lioness of the field arrives permeating heat, inhaling exhaling mist of blistered days perched on strands of morning glories and floats of shimmering porous sun.... she will throb like a wild gyspy air,I tell you, spinning her cauldron of torrid wind--- thirsty lungs blowing bright rubble upon brooks and shores where twinkles of light feed their need for humid skin: lush grasses glint with perspiration huffing and puffing the unfinished sentences of a day which plunges into an ocean of moist human abandon. Daughter of Cancer- Leo, radiant as an orange gold portrait, she will adorn the midsummer mantle with birds dancing on fire tumbling on plumes -- jazzy tunes wriggling her jeweled belly with smoky flavor penetrating her camisole through a rhapsody of August’s saucy haze. And in her nymph-like silhouette, lovers kiss in unrestraint confessions where forests open their secret gardens and tender beasts chew the fire of an impassioned night... this of which August rides without shame, without brain. Favourite Poem From December 2017 Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward Inspiration from Klimt's Painting,' Woman In Gold' ----------------------- Written 12/23/2017, Resubmitted 11/8/2018

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Date: 11/9/2018 1:55:00 PM
Wow Nette, such an impressive write!! No wonder it is a top ,top winner. Congrats - so well deserved xxoo
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Date: 11/9/2018 10:43:00 AM
Wow - what an amazing poem, nette. Bravo for your well deserved gold medal win... a perfect match!
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Date: 11/9/2018 5:39:00 AM
I can see why this was your favorite poem. It is rich in tapestry and well worded Nette, I love it. and you. Have a blessed day, hugs xo
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Date: 1/7/2018 8:10:00 PM
A very enjoyable read. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:49:00 PM
Great verse, Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/26/2017 8:53:00 AM
Wonderfully chewing 'the fire of an impassioned night', Nette ... Congratulations on your as usual nice poem ...
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Date: 12/26/2017 6:53:00 AM
A lovely write, Nette! Trés sensuous! Congrats!
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Date: 12/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your win.
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Date: 12/25/2017 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette ... blessings and happy holidays, my friend! :-)
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Date: 12/23/2017 3:13:00 PM
Great impressionistic poetry, Nette! You wove a grand human tapestry of silky sensual fabric. Beautiful penning this write be. Gorgeous poetry. Love and happy holidays to everyone.
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:34:00 AM
An epic write Nette...
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Date: 12/23/2017 7:35:00 AM
Excellent! Very well done Nette. :) Good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/23/2017 6:18:00 AM
Amazing how original and magnificent his golden paintings are! You painted this woman in gold in your own imagination and brought her to life...lovely poem..best for a win, nette!
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