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Klimt's "Woman in Gold" (portrain of Adele Bloch-Bauer I)

poem written based upon this image--online poetry class assignment

Woman in Gold

she stands  
inside a hush of gold  
  a shimmer thinking itself awake  

patterns breathe  
  slowly  
like ancient symbols remembering their names  

her gaze  
steady  
  unblinking  
holds the room  
  the way light holds dust  
    without touching  

I feel the air  
tilt  
  just a little  
as if the painting leaned closer  
to whisper  
  a secret made of metal and memory  

and somewhere  
beneath the gilded quiet  
a pulse  
  soft  
    persistent  
keeps rising  
like a small bright truth  
trying to be seen
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