Woman In 2017

Fight hard 
as long as you're not too defensive
or worse, stronger than him
so we can't tell that he hit you
so we don't have to pick up your slack

Speak your mind
as long as your voice isn't louder than his
or worse, too assertive or contradicting it
so you say something worth listening to
so he can get his word in edgewise 

Make it rain
as long as you don't make more than him
or worse, take his
so you're not a gold digger
so you can't get out from under his umbrella

Be a damsel
as long as your inevitable distress doesn't cause unrest
or worse, distract from his 
so you know how to fend for yourself 
so we don't have to hear you whine

Stay in shape 
as long as your muscles aren't too bulky 
or worse, bigger than his
so you're easy on the eyes
so you don't hurt his pride

Seduce sweetly
as long as you're not a ****
or worse, a whore
so he wants you
so you think that's what your worth is

Make this house a home
as long as you don't forget who makes the bread around here
or worse, forget to put his dinner on the table
so that you're a good homemaker
so that you have no valid claim to what he makes

Be everything
Be nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/30/2018 6:03:00 PM
Hello Sarah, nice to meet you. You gave good advice in your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 4/11/2018 5:03:00 AM
THanks so much!
Date: 1/25/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks for the poem. I wish women could learn from it.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 1/26/2018 2:44:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and thanks for reading!
Date: 1/6/2018 7:17:00 PM
I for one admire women who do not restrict who they are as people. It's sad to think that men are not secure enough to allow a woman to be themselves. Sadly the world is far far away from truly being enlightened. Poems like this help educate.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 1/8/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Richard. I am glad this poem can offer some insight and that you enjoyed reading it.
Date: 12/29/2017 11:38:00 PM
Powerful pen Sarah! Eloquently explosive. It makes me think of my Mother's voice. (I didn't listen:) xomo!
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 1/8/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 12/29/2017 9:58:00 AM
Sarah, in my estimation thus poem is deserving of poem of the day! A fave for me! In all ways great! Even women give women a hard time. One workplace made fun of a loud lady and I thought no one does that to a guy. Such a shame that we can’t just be ourselves. Have a lovely lovely day! <3 Kim
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 12/29/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Kim! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem. It just kinda pourred out.
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