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Wolf's Tongue

<                                  wolf tongue speaks at night
                                 search for prey has come to end ...
                                         howling escalates





Written by
Katherine Stella 11/16/11

Entry For
Deb Guzzi's Animal Haiku

I Chose The Wolf
My Home State
Is Minnesota
Wolf Pop Estimate 3020 Per D.N.R. 
Yikes

G.L. All

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/25/2011 10:46:00 PM Kat,, a great haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/26/2011 5:58:00 PM hi there..you are trying to get too much into one haiku let the reader plump out the image in their own way..in their mind..most of a haiku is in the readers mind not the writers words, also there is only 1 focus here, 2 parts is the goal..say the 2 joined lines are about the wolf line 3 the juxtaposition can be about the prey..try again [using the same concept] light & love soup mail Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/24/2011 12:34:00 AM KAT, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/16/2011 2:44:00 PM Enjoyed reading this great work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara Login to Reply