Katherine Stella Poet Haiku

Wolf's Tongue

<                                  wolf tongue speaks at night
                                 search for prey has come to end ...
                                         howling escalates





Written by
Katherine Stella 11/16/11

Entry For
Deb Guzzi's Animal Haiku

I Chose The Wolf
My Home State
Is Minnesota
Wolf Pop Estimate 3020 Per D.N.R. 
Yikes

G.L. All

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Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2011 at 10:46 PM Kat,, a great haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi November 26, 2011 at 5:58 PM hi there..you are trying to get too much into one haiku let the reader plump out the image in their own way..in their mind..most of a haiku is in the readers mind not the writers words, also there is only 1 focus here, 2 parts is the goal..say the 2 joined lines are about the wolf line 3 the juxtaposition can be about the prey..try again [using the same concept] light & love soup mail

Poet Destroyer A November 24, 2011 at 12:34 AM KAT, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2011 at 2:44 PM Enjoyed reading this great work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara