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Wolf's Prey

Snow... Its falling I found a white wolf it was well fed I went up to it all of the sudden I hear a gun shot The crows are flying covering the bright blue sky The wolf runs fast like a rabbit A man wearing a black coat coming from the trees shadows comes to me Every step he takes makes the snow gray The crows are flying in circles making the man look like a raven He keeps on walking getting closer , closer , and closer to me He pulls out a sharp dagger stabs me in the chest Blood spills to the ground I fall to the ground in pain screaming in fear as the crows Starts to Peking on my flesh I can no longer see the Art of the blue sky All I see is shadows I thought to me self " Is this how my destiny ends?" Suddenly I hear howling something jumped I don't know what I hear growling the crows are starting to fade away the sunlight is rising I passed out The next I woke up I see the white wolf it saved my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/8/2016 12:47:00 PM
Sorry, I see you can't receive soup mail. I was going to suggest that you might want to change your title as to not give away your climatic ending. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Cheers, Connie
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Abdiel Rios
Date: 2/8/2016 1:22:00 PM
Ok I'll do that thank you
Date: 2/8/2016 12:43:00 PM
Sounds like a bad dream but you were saved in the end. Enigmatic and deeply dark. Well written. Soup mail
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