Wolfish Love

the full moon is bright
shows him her face as he nears
he’s getting hairy
his heart leaps at her beauty
he’s still hungry and eats her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 14, 2011 at 7:32 PM
But!!! was the wolf a man? Maybe she didn't mind if it was. I'd like to think so. Can I have it my way?
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 6:43 PM
well a different ending than the story Jack but he is a wolf when Moon is full but cursed until the morning light.. too late by then.. yum..luv..good luck in the contest..
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I would not want a date with him..I would have never thought about writing one like this ...Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
Kriticos Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:43 PM
I was expecting this to be a love story lol I like the sharp turn you took here made me laugh.....ummm you should make a limerick response to the "super duper discounts" poem, I will add it to mine and judy's, get someone else, and we got us a collaboration!
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Ah, the happy ending. There's no mention how she felt about him as their two bodies 'join up.'
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 4:45 PM
It was probably her own fault for tasting so good. Ouch, my wife just smacked me.
Sivey Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Bummer he ate her...Oh well! Nice write Jack!!
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:04 PM
dang, whadda lout! nice write jack~N
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