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Woke Up Dead

A strange thing just happened, I woke up dead Was on my way to the promised land ahead Angels were singing To my jammies, was clinging Then the alarm went off and I jumped out of bed

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2016 2:26:00 PM

It is me again Have a Happy New Year Hugs Drlene

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/21/2016 10:44:00 AM

Me too... Happy New Year! Hugs back to you my dear friend!!! xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2016 2:24:00 PM

I agree with Jerome, this is a good poem.That was some dream you had. Sometimes dreams can seem to be real. Like being there, only you are asleep.I want to wish you a Merry Christmas.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/21/2016 10:42:00 AM

Sometimes I wish my dreams were real!!! Dearest Darlene, thank you for you sweet comments as always! Merry Christmas... love, Jack xxx

Jerome Malenfant

Date: 12/10/2016 1:40:00 PM

Good one! If you don't mind, here's my variation on it: Early today I woke up quite dead;/ The promised land was just ahead./ The angels were singing/ And the belles were ringing,/ But I turned over and went back to sleep instead.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/11/2016 10:05:00 AM

I like yours better!!! LOL Cheers, Jack

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/10/2016 8:29:00 AM

So you thought you bought the farm//until you heard the alarm//now you're here//drink a beer//before breakfast it won't do you harm! JUMP ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2016 8:35:00 AM

Beer is certainly my drink... yuk!!! Thanks for the advice though! LOL Hope your day is a good one... with NO snow! We're getting dumped on for the next 6 days so they say!!! HAPPY DAYS JOHN JOHN!!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/10/2016 8:21:00 AM

Wow . That is quite the dream Jack. Well put into writing. :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2016 8:27:00 AM

LOL Thanks Miss Heidi! Happy you dropped by... Love & Huggs, Jack xxx