Woke

Squandered the morn Afternoon, blown off Wait! ~ ls this day my last? October 23, 2019 Get in Touch with your Zen contest Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations x

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2019 3:27:00 PM

Hey, Thanks for noticing my 3rd place win, Elaine. And congrats to you again for your 1st place winner with that profound, universal, incomprehensible question! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 8:11:00 PM

It would be horrid to hear the answer be yes!! Congrats on the win, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/4/2019 1:37:00 PM

Now that's a good sign, Andrea! ~ Sylvia Plath

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2019 2:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line - Well done, Gershon :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2019 3:12:00 PM

Thanks for noticing my Zen-zinger. LOL. Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2019 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2019 3:12:00 PM

Thanks for noticing, Heidi. Much appreciated. :) gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2019 9:00:00 AM

One of my favourites, if not for the capitalization I would have awarded this a first place. Thanks for your entry. Great Questionku.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2019 10:54:00 AM

Hey, thanks for letting me know how you felt about this questionku, Richard. And rules are rules. Just re-read them for the contest, and you are absolutely right.... What's that old saying? --- Rules are made to be broken. No wonder I blew it. LOL. (Of course, it's 'Records are made to be broken---and not phonograph records either. LOL). Thank you again so much. Enjoyed the opportunity you gave us in the contest. Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/23/2019 3:38:00 PM

Yikes. Hopefully not - just resting for a fully productive day tomorrow!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 3:53:00 PM

But can you be sure tomorrow will really come?! ~ Yikes! LOL, gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/23/2019 1:16:00 PM

It's gonna finish anyway...tomorrow GOD Willing, YOU"LL have Another...if you're gonna Squander It...Squander It WELL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 3:52:00 PM

Ha, ha! Love the comment, Arturo. As in, if you're gonna rob a bank, get a few hundred million. Don't bother with $20,000 or some such figure... LOL. Thanks, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 10/23/2019 12:16:00 PM

Maybe for just laying around and doing nothing, but tomorrow will be twice the work. : ) Kind of dark but not really. Nicely done my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 3:51:00 PM

Thanks, Chris. Glad you can see that it's 'woke, but not really dark... Smiles, Gershon