Woke

Squandered the morn
Afternoon, blown off
  Wait! ~ ls this day my last?


            
            October 23, 2019
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Perrin Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations x
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:27 PM
Hey, Thanks for noticing my 3rd place win, Elaine. And congrats to you again for your 1st place winner with that profound, universal, incomprehensible question! :) gw
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 8:11 PM
It would be horrid to hear the answer be yes!! Congrats on the win, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Now that's a good sign, Andrea! ~ Sylvia Plath
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:08 PM
- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line - Well done, Gershon :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thanks for noticing my Zen-zinger. LOL. Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. :) gw
Sands Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations for your win Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thanks for noticing, Heidi. Much appreciated. :) gw
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:00 AM
One of my favourites, if not for the capitalization I would have awarded this a first place. Thanks for your entry. Great Questionku.
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Hey, thanks for letting me know how you felt about this questionku, Richard. And rules are rules. Just re-read them for the contest, and you are absolutely right.... What's that old saying? --- Rules are made to be broken. No wonder I blew it. LOL. (Of course, it's 'Records are made to be broken---and not phonograph records either. LOL). Thank you again so much. Enjoyed the opportunity you gave us in the contest. Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Yikes. Hopefully not - just resting for a fully productive day tomorrow!!
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:53 PM
But can you be sure tomorrow will really come?! ~ Yikes! LOL, gw
Michael Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 1:16 PM
It's gonna finish anyway...tomorrow GOD Willing, YOU"LL have Another...if you're gonna Squander It...Squander It WELL
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Ha, ha! Love the comment, Arturo. As in, if you're gonna rob a bank, get a few hundred million. Don't bother with $20,000 or some such figure... LOL. Thanks, Gershon
Green Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 12:16 PM
Maybe for just laying around and doing nothing, but tomorrow will be twice the work. : ) Kind of dark but not really. Nicely done my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Thanks, Chris. Glad you can see that it's 'woke, but not really dark... Smiles, Gershon
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