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Woes of a Figure Conscious Mom

I do not like wearing oversized clothes, I am a modern mom of the 21st century I’d like to be one of the hour glass moms. I would hit the gym to shed of soft fats That I may put on during my pregnancy I do not like wearing oversized clothes. Never depend upon the household chores To eat the foods I would rather be choosy I’d like to be one of the hour glass moms. If I happen to be one of the caesareans Will hit the gym to heal the stitches safely. I do not like wearing oversized clothes. For a svelte figure I would do all the things, Despite having a hectic job persistently, I’d like to be one of the hour glass moms. I would get back to my socialite evenings Feel great getting back into my old clothes. I do not like wearing oversized clothes I’d rather be one of the hour glass moms ******* May 1, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: Gender Bender by Richard L.

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/22/2014 1:18:00 AM

Many woman do feel this way when they are pregnant. But, I think the health of the unborn or newborn baby should be what the mother is focused on.... You did a great job with the contest theme. Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram!

Sam Raj

Date: 6/19/2014 10:19:00 AM

Dr. Ramji, Nameste. Congrats on a great write. Keep in touch

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 7:12:00 AM

Congrats on the fine win Dr. Ram....Tim

Archana Garg

Date: 6/19/2014 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on tour fine win, sir. I also had the same woes but lost them all when I got my baby in my hands.heHehe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2014 11:33:00 PM

Hi Dr Ram, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2014 1:03:00 PM

Dr Ram, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2014 11:08:00 AM

A well deserved winner Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/18/2014 9:58:00 AM

You have described the plight of many women. It is sad that society has taught women that they need to look a certain way. The weight of this expectation is enormous. On reading this one again I should have given it a higher placement. Congratulations on a fine poem.

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/3/2014 8:09:00 AM

Good one. You classified the poem as free verse, but it looks like a villanelle. Cheers, Roy

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/20/2014 10:40:00 PM

This is old poem.. Line 1 and 3 do not rhyme properly. So I thought not to term it Villanelle

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/1/2014 4:51:00 PM

hmmm I must go check out what the contest wants, it's good to be a healthy loving woman, no hour glass needed ;) Light & Love

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 5/1/2014 1:58:00 PM

You are truly a model,in writing and appearance;lucky is the godess that calls you husband. Thanks for your greetings and good luck in the contest.

Ken Carroll

Date: 5/1/2014 11:16:00 AM

An incisive write Dr. Ram..I enjoyed this one and good luck!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/1/2014 7:54:00 AM

great write, Dr. Ram!!! .. you surely fit to be a woman.... you exactly know what a girl wants and not!! ..very well written... kudos!! ^__^