Woeful Vows

"Till death us do part"
Thus I stepped upon a trap;
Oh, Why I said that?
Now I wail to no avail,
Lo, my life is in shambles!



~A Brian Strand 1 to 14 line contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Abdul xx
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Abdul :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:03 PM
funny one. Congrats on your win. I really liked this one too.
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