Andrea Dietrich Poet Senryu

woeful

on   a     s e a     of    w o e
    he    f   l   o   a   t   s   his longings
                                  to   an    e    m    p    t    y     
                                                                            shore

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Line Gauthier June 14, 2025 at 9:54 AM well crafted ~

Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2025 at 5:43 AM Oh that is deep and sad… Nice work!

CayCay Godwin May 31, 2025 at 7:03 PM Oh, emotionally hard hitting, deep sensation penned. Love, CayCay

Sotto Poet May 30, 2025 at 1:38 PM Well-crafted with a lot of depth, I enjoyed reading your brevity. A fave for me

Paula Goldsmith May 30, 2025 at 11:50 AM What a creative write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............

Victor Buhagiar May 30, 2025 at 10:27 AM A sea of woe. So sad. So common. Great haiku. Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2025 at 10:31 AM thanks. I decided to change it to senryu

Joseph P. DiMino May 30, 2025 at 9:08 AM Yes, sometimes the shore is little more inviting than the sea. Love the ocean themes of the last few I have read. Lots of depth, no pun intended, in this one. Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2025 at 10:31 AM thanks, Joe.