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on a s e a of w o e he f l o a t s his longings to an e m p t y shore

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Date: 5/31/2025 7:03:00 PM
Oh, emotionally hard hitting, deep sensation penned. Love, CayCay
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Date: 5/30/2025 1:38:00 PM
Well-crafted with a lot of depth, I enjoyed reading your brevity. A fave for me
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Date: 5/30/2025 11:50:00 AM
What a creative write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............
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Date: 5/30/2025 10:27:00 AM
A sea of woe. So sad. So common. Great haiku.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 10:31:00 AM
thanks. I decided to change it to senryu
Date: 5/30/2025 9:08:00 AM
Yes, sometimes the shore is little more inviting than the sea. Love the ocean themes of the last few I have read. Lots of depth, no pun intended, in this one.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 10:31:00 AM
thanks, Joe.

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