woeful

on a s e a of w o e he f l o a t s his longings to an e m p t y shore

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/14/2025 9:54:00 AM

well crafted ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2025 5:43:00 AM

Oh that is deep and sad… Nice work!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/31/2025 7:03:00 PM

Oh, emotionally hard hitting, deep sensation penned. Love, CayCay

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/30/2025 1:38:00 PM

Well-crafted with a lot of depth, I enjoyed reading your brevity. A fave for me

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2025 11:50:00 AM

What a creative write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2025 10:27:00 AM

A sea of woe. So sad. So common. Great haiku.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 10:31:00 AM

thanks. I decided to change it to senryu

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/30/2025 9:08:00 AM

Yes, sometimes the shore is little more inviting than the sea. Love the ocean themes of the last few I have read. Lots of depth, no pun intended, in this one.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 10:31:00 AM

thanks, Joe.