Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

Woebegone

Sadness in
   his downcast eyes;
      in tears,
         devastated.

His four-legged friend,
   birthday gift,
      deceased;
         just buried.

Poor child,
   woebegone.
      He still can't
         believe his dog died;

keeps asking Mom and Dad
   "Why?"
       "Is he coming back?"


                (Yalto)

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
 line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 07/19/2020

Submitted for...
July Na Or Hm Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date written: 07/28/2020

Received an N/A in....
STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (11)any theme any form poetry contest
Judged 7/19/2020

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Aditi Mishra August 1, 2020 at 8:43 PM Edward this is such an honest portrayal of innocent emotions my friend. I could feel the sadness melting my heart. I love the themes reflected in your poems. Keep writing and inspiring. Congratulations on your win :) Edward Ibeh August 2, 2020 at 6:15 AM Thank you so much, Aditi:-) I'm glad this poem resonated with you. Have a glorious day, my friend!

Sam Kauffman July 29, 2020 at 9:39 PM So sad, Edward. Having lost dearly loved pets - members of our family - this poems brings back that heartbreak especially seen through the eyes of a child. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you! Edward Ibeh July 30, 2020 at 3:40 AM Losing a member of the family, even if it's a pet, is devastating. Thanks for the visit and congrats, Sam:-)

Constance La France July 29, 2020 at 5:39 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest for July with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance Edward Ibeh July 30, 2020 at 3:34 AM Many thanks for my placement, Constance:-) Thanks for faving this poem as well, my friend!

John Watt July 29, 2020 at 1:51 PM Nice to see a win for this heartbreaking Yalto, Edward. Never say never! Congratulations, my friend. Edward Ibeh July 30, 2020 at 3:27 AM Thank you so much, John:-)

Jenna Logan July 29, 2020 at 1:08 PM I felt your lines so deeply, Edward. I've lost several pups and a devoted kitty. I'll not have another because it's too hard to bear the sorrow. Your write deserved so much more than an N/A, and now you have it! Edward Ibeh July 30, 2020 at 3:29 AM I can't imagine the pain and sorrow of losing so many beloved pets, Jenna. I appreciate the kind words, my friend!

Eve Roper July 29, 2020 at 1:01 PM A very sad story for a child that doesn't understand death. Congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh July 30, 2020 at 3:26 AM Thank you, Eve:-) Blessings, my friend!