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Wizard of Sleep

Head pillow Slipping under me Giving pause From the edge Brink of reality’s wake Muffled sound of sleep Entrant into Andrea Dietrich's "WORD WIZARDS' CHALLENGE" contest pillow/ slipping/ pause/ edge/ wake/ muffled Form: Shadorma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/17/2011 10:50:00 AM
Russell, I don't think I've read a Shadorma before and you wrote yours so beautifully. The transition from consciousness to sleep is conveyed so creatively. Andrea's going to love this one as much as I do. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/16/2011 6:26:00 AM
Well done !! Enjoyed the read !!
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Date: 12/15/2011 2:53:00 PM
Clever piece for the contest, Russell
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Date: 12/15/2011 12:01:00 PM
intriguing the heck out of me, russell... sleep well with winning's best and hugggs! :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:54:00 AM
I knew you would get my hint Russell and as for me being fickle?? nope it isn't always a bad thing.. :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:33:00 AM
Outstanding write Russell. The best to you in Andrea's Word Wizard Challenge. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:19:00 AM
Love that "giving pause" line Russell, wishing you all the best for Andrea's contest ;) I need to give this one a try too!!
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