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Wizard: Muffled Cries Wake Me

muffled cries wake me
town dwellers slip on the snow- -
my pillow stays warm

muffled, wake, dwellers, slip, pillow

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Kim Merryman

Date: 12/27/2011 7:20:00 PM

Nice haiku, Jack. Congrats on your win! kim

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/26/2011 6:41:00 PM

Unusal haiku. Nice seasonal poetry. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

Date: 12/23/2011 10:47:00 AM

A gem from you Jack.Congratulations on your win.

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/22/2011 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations Jack. Well done.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2011 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your super placement in Andrea's "Word Wizard's" challenge Jack. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/22/2011 1:23:00 AM

That's so cool! Ouch! I slipped on the snow too :0) ...and your pillow still warm . Great Haiku, dear Jack. Congrats and Merry Christmas to you and to your loved ones! Best, iolanda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2011 12:47:00 AM

Jack, this one appealed to the sadistic side of Susan and me, I am sure. haha.VEry cool little haiku. Congrats to you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2011 4:21:00 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..If written for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your faithfulness in stopping by...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2011 10:46:00 AM

Awesome, Jack! I bet you do see a lot of people slipping on the snow in Plymouth. Such snowy days were created for sleeping in. Love your entry and wish you success! Love to you and Sue, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/16/2011 10:01:00 AM

So cosy, I gree with you; your ku makes me know I'm in the right place! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 6:40:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jack. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/16/2011 5:33:00 AM

OH wow, now this is a very awesome write here Jack!! I really like how you integrated these words into the Haiku!! You did great is doing so!! Outstanding Work!!