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Witnessing Road Kill

Walking down sidewalk Watching cars pass by and by Looks from side to side In dismay looks down Now hating every roadster Death smears on one tire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/20/2016 11:01:00 PM
A gross image about the smeared tire ... but of course road kill is never pretty. Did you actually see this happen or just imagination? Something like that would stick (no pun intended) with you for a long time. Interesting poem.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/23/2016 7:52:00 AM
Haha, yeah, this is a true story! Thanks again for readin my dear friend (: <3~Laura
Date: 2/21/2014 7:31:00 PM
Slambi. Another dead bambi. The roads are scattered with road kill here. The buzzards are to fat to fly...disgusting world we live in. ~Kilmer
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Date: 4/29/2012 3:28:00 AM
NICE!!! MY GOODNESS!!!! INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:53:00 PM
I must say YOUR Versatility in Japanese Forms of POETRY is Incredible Superb PEN YOUR Laureatus Genious SHINES LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... Harry
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:50:00 PM
an interesting sedoka topic, Laura. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:10:00 PM
Laura-I like this one! I should try one of the Sedokas one day :) Thank you for your kind comment!
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:15:00 PM
Eeeewwwww!..lol
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Date: 7/2/2011 4:57:00 PM
Very descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
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