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Witnessing Road Kill

Walking down sidewalk Watching cars pass by and by Looks from side to side In dismay looks down Now hating every roadster Death smears on one tire

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/20/2016 11:01:00 PM

A gross image about the smeared tire ... but of course road kill is never pretty. Did you actually see this happen or just imagination? Something like that would stick (no pun intended) with you for a long time. Interesting poem.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/23/2016 7:52:00 AM

Haha, yeah, this is a true story! Thanks again for readin my dear friend (: <3~Laura

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 2/21/2014 7:31:00 PM

Slambi. Another dead bambi. The roads are scattered with road kill here. The buzzards are to fat to fly...disgusting world we live in. ~Kilmer

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/29/2012 3:28:00 AM

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/30/2011 4:53:00 PM

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