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WITNESS

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The oak splits its ribs for the nesting wren, lets termites tunnel its marrow to dust~ a cathedral collapsing in slow grace. Even the gutter, choked with last night’s rain, holds a sky for the beetle’s iridescent back. You’ve seen it: the way the sidewalk cracks to cradle dandelion roots, how rust kisses the abandoned swing set red, how the subway grate exhales its warm breath up the skirt of a shivering stranger. The world is a wound that heals by staying open. Somewhere, a spider repairs her torn web with the silk of her own body. Somewhere, a streetlamp hums to the moths it will burn alive by dawn. And you~ you are alive to witness it.
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Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 6:23 PM
Wow ~ awesome. Added to my FAVE's.
Maverick Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Very simple yet strong messsage Sara That untangles the complexitys of this World we exerience now.'
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