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Without You

without you an empty world, core frozen, remembers the heat reflected in gemstones within its crust. sun flares flagrantly mock. wasting its fire on emptiness. where is the one who burned for me my sun, our molten moments left as scars, invisible. I wear minutes wrapped about me like chains. they weigh so heavily marking my breasts, my hips. why are you not here to free me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/10/2017 1:53:00 PM
Fantastic write. Angry at the end, the way I do also
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Date: 9/25/2017 7:53:00 AM
Simply lovely, I always appreciate your turns and wording x
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/25/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Thvia.
Date: 9/25/2017 2:30:00 AM
Nothing ever truly dies...for nothing is ever truly newly born. The great "Universal-Collective-Consciousness" created sentient life to wonder about its own dazzling magnificence! The awe, the mystery, the endless beauty of it all! We all experience "Existence" countless times as many forms...time and time...and time again. One day we all open our "alien" eyes to some strange "alien" skies...and we are aware once again -- for nothing ever truly dies! My very warmest regards, Patricia. :) john
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Thvia Shetley
Date: 9/25/2017 7:52:00 AM
Love this bit of truth, John. You're a star.
Date: 9/24/2017 10:31:00 PM
Tender and haunting xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 11:01:00 PM
thank you.

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