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In my mind The couch turns blue From its real red Developed true Lumpy and soft But absent of glue It feels empty… Without you Russell Sivey

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Date: 8/5/2017 2:20:00 AM
Only a heart made of stone wouldn't be touched by the tenderness and romanticism of this superb poem dear friend, Russell! Loved it!
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Date: 8/4/2017 1:57:00 PM
A very creative write how you showed this and expressed it Russell. Well done :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 1:01:00 PM
I love this Russell! Sometimes less is more as in the brevity of this little gem! Bravo! : )
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Date: 8/4/2017 9:35:00 AM
Short and oh so sweet :) love it! xomo
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:43:00 AM
Very clever! I love this. It says a lot in so few words.
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