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Without You

In my mind
The couch turns blue
From its real red
Developed true
Lumpy and soft
But absent of glue
     It feels empty…
Without you

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Trifiatis Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 2:20 AM
Only a heart made of stone wouldn't be touched by the tenderness and romanticism of this superb poem dear friend, Russell! Loved it!
Sands Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 1:57 PM
A very creative write how you showed this and expressed it Russell. Well done :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 1:01 PM
I love this Russell! Sometimes less is more as in the brevity of this little gem! Bravo! : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Short and oh so sweet :) love it! xomo
Hopper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Very clever! I love this. It says a lot in so few words.
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