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Without You

Standing near my window pane, I hear you say again and again.. "I Love You". I smile staring at the streets covered in snow, Saying "I love you more than you will ever know.. ..Oh I do". Turning desperately to get one last glare, But the vision of you disappeared into thin air.. "Come back to me". Deeply depressed,feeling so down, I wish my life would just turn around.. "I wish". I lay in my bed dreaming you were still here, But the thoughts in my head of you aren't as clear as before.. "Why did you have to die?" You left me so suddenly without any warning, It hurts me to wake up without you each morning.. "I'm so Alone". God I need you with me here, The future is all I fear.. Being without you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/27/2013 8:51:00 AM
I see the continued serious level of your emotion, these are great reads and looking forward to more works.
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Louise Phipps
Date: 3/28/2013 3:10:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 3/22/2013 6:21:00 PM
LOUISE , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
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Louise Phipps
Date: 3/24/2013 9:10:00 AM
Hi, Aww thankyou very much I will give it a go :) x
Date: 3/17/2013 11:19:00 AM
A very emotional write, well done I hope it is imagination only xx
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Louise Phipps
Date: 3/17/2013 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, yes it is imagination only but I wrote this for a friend.x

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