Mona Jalees Poet Blank verse

Without You

The day When I met  you ..
,was truly  the day when my life begun ..
When I got words for my silence
colors to my life …
Shades of my presence..and
meaning of my existence..!!!! 
What if I deny that you’re no more loved by me 
forgotten by me ..
 But my heart ..
Ah my rebellious heart !!!
Which denies the rule .. Acts so cruel ..
oh my heart !! I beseech you 
 let me forget 
the moments which I spent with  him ..
laughed together 
cried together  ..
living with his  haunted memories is hard..  
And ..
It‘s hard to live without you !!

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Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2013 at 2:19 PM MONA :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA Mona Jalees January 9, 2013 at 5:36 AM I'm so pleased to see this.thanx for appreciating and encouraging me :):)

Mona Jalees January 7, 2013 at 5:42 AM Thanx alot for selecting my poetry this week with other poems on main page :)

Richard Lamoureux December 29, 2012 at 3:09 PM Welcome to Poetry soup, I enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Very intresting use of words, I like how you created the mood of this piece. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem Mona Jalees December 30, 2012 at 3:11 AM Thanx Richard !!! I just write what I feel :)

Reggae Magnet December 25, 2012 at 6:53 AM When love birds sing on sorrows notes, the nightingales chips its wonderous refute, it never dies, it never dies, just give it another try. Better to be loved than never at all, nice read. Mona Jalees December 25, 2012 at 11:56 PM well said !! thanx for appreciating me in this manner .

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2012 at 11:11 AM A touching, but very well written poem Mona - I like it! - Wishing you welcome to P- Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and give comments and you will get back. - Always nice to get comments on what we write. - Hope Christmas will be a pleasant and peaceful time for you and your family. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Mona Jalees December 22, 2012 at 4:42 AM Thankyou very much for your words .I 'm so pleased :)

Carol Sunshine Brown December 20, 2012 at 10:42 AM A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Mona. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol Mona Jalees December 22, 2012 at 4:43 AM I wud luv to learn from other poets and that will guide in writing my own :) thanx for your words !!

Honestly J.T. December 18, 2012 at 12:43 PM yet we must move on. great poem - JH Mona Jalees December 22, 2012 at 4:44 AM moving on is sometimes difficult ..anyway thanx alot :)