Without You

I used to fall asleep thinking of you
Your lips, your hair, your smile, your touch, your eyes
Everyday my love for you grew and grew
For some odd reason i thought you'd stay mine

I miss you so much i just wanna cry,
Without you i see no reason not to
I am happy thats just the saddest lie
I never thought i'd care this much 'bout you

Now instead of dreaming i lay awake
Sadended and thinking of all the good times
Why do i love you, why did my heart have to break?
I have much to ask, but not enough lines

Your gone, but i cant stop thinking of you
And i hope you are feeling the same too
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 13, 2011 at 10:53 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
Anderson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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January 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out the contests too.. good luck..happy weekend...
Mehta Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 5:08 PM
Soothing platonic thoughts of love with passions and nice rhyming , Devin
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January 7, 2011 at 4:58 PM
I really like this
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