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Without You

I used to fall asleep thinking of you Your lips, your hair, your smile, your touch, your eyes Everyday my love for you grew and grew For some odd reason i thought you'd stay mine I miss you so much i just wanna cry, Without you i see no reason not to I am happy thats just the saddest lie I never thought i'd care this much 'bout you Now instead of dreaming i lay awake Sadended and thinking of all the good times Why do i love you, why did my heart have to break? I have much to ask, but not enough lines Your gone, but i cant stop thinking of you And i hope you are feeling the same too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/13/2011 10:53:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2011 6:43:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 1/7/2011 5:35:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out the contests too.. good luck..happy weekend...
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Date: 1/7/2011 5:08:00 PM
Soothing platonic thoughts of love with passions and nice rhyming , Devin
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:58:00 PM
I really like this
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