Without You....

Without you I cannot-talk, listen or hear
Without you I cannot-share, care or give
Without you I cannot-walk, dance or sing
Without you I cannot-read, write or remember
Without you I cannot-cherish, love or vow
Without you I cannot- can you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Wow! Superb write, Copeland. I like the way you employed the repetition and the last line is priceless! Awesome writing. Best wishes, Carolyn
Callandret Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:45 PM
I love it, it's deep and very good.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Copeland, simply wonderful! So concise yet poignant in its validation of how the pain of love can immobilize a person. Bravo! Aloha, Connie
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:03 PM
another wonderful write
Hales Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:03 PM
oh we have all felt this ... love the last line sarah x
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