Without You...

Lost,
Alone,
And afraid,
Sad and friendless,
How I wish this pain would just disappear;
Leave me at peace with solitary thoughts;
Isolated,
Secluded,
Destroyed,
Scared.
Numb,
Empty,
Uncaring,
Without feeling,
You left me a vacant shell, drained of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 7:06 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
Horsman Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:03 AM
good luck in the contest,awesomw poem, such feeling. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Wonderful entry for the contest.. good luck .. my entry which I just wrote is "Triple Threat"..see if u like it.. with luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Very fine display of,meaningful words to convey thoughts in short
Roberts Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 5:40 PM
way to go on the triple, good job, good luck in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Oh boy I like this one Tirzah.. if its for Constance's contest....good luck.. something she will enjoy... if not it was a great read tonight.. am so busy don't know why I am Souping..haha.. with luv..
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