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Without You...

Lost, Alone, And afraid, Sad and friendless, How I wish this pain would just disappear; Leave me at peace with solitary thoughts; Isolated, Secluded, Destroyed, Scared. Numb, Empty, Uncaring, Without feeling, You left me a vacant shell, drained of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 7:06:00 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:03:00 AM
good luck in the contest,awesomw poem, such feeling. Harry
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:29:00 AM
Wonderful entry for the contest.. good luck .. my entry which I just wrote is "Triple Threat"..see if u like it.. with luv..
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Date: 7/26/2010 7:46:00 PM
Very fine display of,meaningful words to convey thoughts in short
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:40:00 PM
way to go on the triple, good job, good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:03:00 PM
Oh boy I like this one Tirzah.. if its for Constance's contest....good luck.. something she will enjoy... if not it was a great read tonight.. am so busy don't know why I am Souping..haha.. with luv..
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