Without You

Without you 
I would be an iceberg
Frosty & cold 
A steel foundation 
A mighty fortress 
A vault at the bank
A self imposed prison
An armored heart 
A concrete soul
With no admittance allowed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today, thanks for the comments on my works.
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Courtney. May your week be filled with good health and be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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