Without Thought

Challenges come swiftly
While emotions get carried away
Far too soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 3, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Nice senryu Tyesha, I left you some soup mail...Raul
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February 24, 2009 at 4:46 PM
So much truth in this poem. Good message. The consequences of the emotions without though can cause hurt feeling that are often difficult to mend. Insightful poem. Karen
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February 17, 2009 at 12:25 AM
Stop and think,,,I always think that after my emotions have taken me where I shouldn't be. I think you've been in my head Ty.
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February 12, 2009 at 10:59 PM
I am not sure whether or not it is a Senryu or a Haiku, I have never distinguished between the two before..I am still learning about all the different types of poetry, Thanks for the feedback..God Bless*Tyesha
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February 12, 2009 at 6:14 PM
This is lovely but I think maybe it is a Senryu. Nice job. BG
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February 11, 2009 at 9:53 AM
Yes, this is so true and very clearly and well expressed. Michael
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February 11, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Well done with this Haiku..emotions can get carried away based on circumstances..Good work.
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