"without Music"

Come to me baby, walk across the floor...
Take my hand my love and just close the door..
Move towards me as I start to dim the light..
Pressed against each other we will slow dance the night..
Chest to chest our hearts play a song that only we can hear..
The beat so soothing , a ballad we hold so dear..
The music will play like a love story that never ends..
Till our eyes close and we slip away, as the music continues to blend..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/23/2010 7:52:00 AM
Romance is alive and well....this is lovely, Michael !!
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:57:00 AM
Very nicely shown, Michael. IN the last line, I was thinking, gosh, why sleep away? If they are dancing, maybe say "slip away" (into their feelings for one another). I really like how you write so down to earth. Let me read some more!!
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:16:00 PM
Quite musical. I think the poem should read aloud for effect.
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:57:00 PM
Very enjoyable write..Glad that you are doing the writing for entertainment but sorry that you had the shoulder surgery....Hope that it is totally healed..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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