Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

"without Music"

Come to me baby, walk across the floor...
Take my hand my love and just close the door..
Move towards me as I start to dim the light..
Pressed against each other we will slow dance the night..
Chest to chest our hearts play a song that only we can hear..
The beat so soothing , a ballad we hold so dear..
The music will play like a love story that never ends..
Till our eyes close and we slip away, as the music continues to blend..

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Carrie Richards May 23, 2010 at 7:52 AM Romance is alive and well....this is lovely, Michael !!

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2010 at 11:57 AM Very nicely shown, Michael. IN the last line, I was thinking, gosh, why sleep away? If they are dancing, maybe say "slip away" (into their feelings for one another). I really like how you write so down to earth. Let me read some more!!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 21, 2010 at 5:16 PM Quite musical. I think the poem should read aloud for effect.

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2010 at 3:57 PM Very enjoyable write..Glad that you are doing the writing for entertainment but sorry that you had the shoulder surgery....Hope that it is totally healed..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara