John Aaron Green Poet Free verse

Without Love

As my heart falls deeper, 
                           your soul cries.
                      
                           For me, the echoes are silence. 
                           Our deep love is frayed.

                           My soft heart descends
                           into your loving soul.

                           Forever sorrow is gone,
                           all shadows of loneliness fade.



                           To nevermore be without love.





                           created by johnaarongreen

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Suzanne C. Goudreau July 6, 2014 at 8:29 PM A moving and sentimental write. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. Very nicely done! Hi, how have you been?

Cory Long October 18, 2012 at 8:03 PM this was beautiful and every line holds such power.. Where did you go my friend? I miss talking to you Cory

Elizabeth Wesley August 13, 2012 at 3:19 PM How and where are you John? Is life treating you well and I'm wondering what happened to you!

Dinda Minardi June 8, 2012 at 8:00 AM This is very sweet. I love each line, John.

Deborah Burch June 7, 2012 at 8:36 PM I have greatly enjoyed reading your works...amazingly tender and heartfelt...some wonderfully deep...all resonating God's enduring and sustaining love...thank you for visiting me...I am greatful ...hugs,deb

Elizabeth Wesley June 7, 2012 at 7:22 PM Such tenderness John, a shortwork of art to touch my soul. So wonderful to have you with us again! Love, Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2012 at 5:00 PM John, sometimes I think my life would be better without the love.. But, like your ending i can't accept such a life.. xox.. pd

Dan Kearley June 4, 2012 at 1:04 AM I hope you found the love John...X-celent write! :-)

Gwendolen Song June 3, 2012 at 12:45 PM HHMMMmmm! Get that pen a'writin, youngin'! Don't keep your fans waiting out here in the cold! G.

Anne Rutherford June 1, 2012 at 7:06 AM Dear John , This is sad and joyful at the same time. Great to see you here again,missed you.For me loneliness and sorrow are with me every moment even though I'm trying to live each minute without him.Everyone says It will get easier, wish it would start soon.'To nevermore be without love' Great line!!! Your friend ,Anne

Gwendolen Song May 31, 2012 at 10:40 PM Such an invigorating poem, Jon. Knowing the background, it brings me great tears of joy! Have you ever you tubed" Healing Rain" by Michael W. Smith? Will u watch it and tell me whatcha think?...God's healing rain has really helped me in gigantic ways! I am forever thankful! :) Gwendolen Gwendolen Song June 4, 2012 at 3:49 PM Thanks for letting me know how much u enjoyed the song! An emotional God-filled treat! :)

Joann Grisetti May 31, 2012 at 5:51 PM Sounds very romantic, to nevermore be withour love. Brilliant.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 30, 2012 at 12:41 PM This is so lovely written John......oxox love Anne-Lise

Pace Ink-U-Script May 30, 2012 at 12:20 PM Yikes..I can't believe that I'm now finally reading your work..its amazingly different and I love your style.