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Without Love

As my heart falls deeper, your soul cries. For me, the echoes are silence. Our deep love is frayed. My soft heart descends into your loving soul. Forever sorrow is gone, all shadows of loneliness fade. To nevermore be without love. created by johnaarongreen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/6/2014 8:29:00 PM
A moving and sentimental write. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. Very nicely done! Hi, how have you been?
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:03:00 PM
this was beautiful and every line holds such power.. Where did you go my friend? I miss talking to you Cory
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Date: 8/13/2012 3:19:00 PM
How and where are you John? Is life treating you well and I'm wondering what happened to you!
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:00:00 AM
This is very sweet. I love each line, John.
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:36:00 PM
I have greatly enjoyed reading your works...amazingly tender and heartfelt...some wonderfully deep...all resonating God's enduring and sustaining love...thank you for visiting me...I am greatful ...hugs,deb
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:22:00 PM
Such tenderness John, a shortwork of art to touch my soul. So wonderful to have you with us again! Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:00:00 PM
John, sometimes I think my life would be better without the love.. But, like your ending i can't accept such a life.. xox.. pd
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 AM
I hope you found the love John...X-celent write! :-)
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:45:00 PM
HHMMMmmm! Get that pen a'writin, youngin'! Don't keep your fans waiting out here in the cold! G.
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:06:00 AM
Dear John , This is sad and joyful at the same time. Great to see you here again,missed you.For me loneliness and sorrow are with me every moment even though I'm trying to live each minute without him.Everyone says It will get easier, wish it would start soon.'To nevermore be without love' Great line!!! Your friend ,Anne
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Date: 5/31/2012 10:40:00 PM
Such an invigorating poem, Jon. Knowing the background, it brings me great tears of joy! Have you ever you tubed" Healing Rain" by Michael W. Smith? Will u watch it and tell me whatcha think?...God's healing rain has really helped me in gigantic ways! I am forever thankful! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 6/4/2012 3:49:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know how much u enjoyed the song! An emotional God-filled treat! :)
Date: 5/31/2012 5:51:00 PM
Sounds very romantic, to nevermore be withour love. Brilliant.
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:41:00 PM
This is so lovely written John......oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
Yikes..I can't believe that I'm now finally reading your work..its amazingly different and I love your style.
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